An Embarrasing Experience-draft1
An embarrassing experience happend at restaurant that I never forget.When my younger sister-Lisa was 5 years old, my dad took my family to a declicate restaurant. My older sister Peggy and I had expected this for a long time. But in the beginning, Lisa cried and my mom couldn't stop. All people in the restaurant saw us strangely. Afterward I went to grabbed a trink. I walked so fast that the cup fell loudly. My mom looked at me angrily. Becauseof the two events, we finished the meal very quickly. In the end, my did didn't take enough money to pay the meal. Finally dad called his friend to come to pay for us. The experience was so embarrassing that I couldn't forget.
posted by Butterfly @ 6:27 AM
11 Comments:
I think you don't want to go the restaurant again.
What a big joke. Oh、I show sympathy on you.
My "dad" didn't take enough money to pay the meal. 打錯了
happend at restaurant
restaurant 加冠詞
a restaurant
at the beginning
Lisa cried and my mom couldn't stop.這樣是不事變成Lisa哭 mom 不能停止
Lisa cried and my mom couldn't stop her from crying
All people in the restaurant saw
saw 式不是用looked at 比較好
In the end .in 用 at
did?dad
很爆笑的經驗
my mom couldn't stop.
怪怪的 也許可以加個受詞
my did didn't take enough money to pay the meal.
是my dad(打字打太快吼XDDDDDD)
第一行happend=>happened
"the"restaurant
declicate??我查不到這個字ㄟ...
couldn't stop??怪怪的
trink??有這個字嗎?
did=>dad
happen=>happened
did=>dad
restaurant 要加冠詞唄!!
Lisa cried and my mom couldn't stop感覺怪怪的= =?
at restaurant好像沒有冠詞...
不愧是蝴蝶一家~果然處處有爆點~
"Lisa cried and my mom couldn't stop"文法似乎不太對。
還有可能是打字打太快的關係，happend,dad好像拼錯囉。
"Then, we went to our room which is 5 floor"改成"Then, we went to our room which is in the 5th floor"才對。
：］
Becauseof the two events還有my did都打太快了
my "did" didn't take enough money to pay the meal.
是"dad"
字打太快的後果XDD(被踢開)
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