My bedroom-draft1
My bedroom is a very big room. When you enter the room. You can see the rectangle desk in the center of the room, and the bookcase is next to it. One the right corner, there are the TV and the sofa, my piano is beside the TV. The back wall is lined with my bed, and my bed is behind the piano and the desk. The closet is on the left corner and in front of the bed. The audio is on the top of the closet. The dresser is next to the closet. The bathroom is behind the door, in front of the dresser.I think my bedroom is very good not only comfortable but also convenient. Because I can do many thing in my bedroom.
posted by Butterfly @ 3:21 PM
7 Comments:
when you enter the room=>後面要加逗號而不是句號吧!!
I think my bedroom is very good not only comfortable but also convenient=>怪怪的!!
When you enter the room.這就是一句了嗎?
I think my bedroom is very good(, and it's) not only comfortable but also convenient.
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dresser.I think my
dresser. I think my
I think my bedroom is very good
後面接not only but also很奇怪
I can do many thing
thing+s
1.When you enter the room.後面應該還要加東西吧
2.One the right corner是不是打錯了
3.I think my bedroom is very good not only comfortable but also convenient.在good後面加個and
4.many thing 少打個s
My bedroom is a very big room. When you enter the room. ->這兩句應該合成一句吧!
好像有很多重複的字ㄟ....你可以用代名詞代替喔!
1.Because I can do many "things" in my bedroom.
原來這是妳夢想中的房間…
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