Pollution-draft1
The pollution is a serious problem of the world. The cause of pollution is very much. For example, people invent the product that ruin the environment, and overuse the nature resource. Because of people's selfishness they ruin the environment for their benefit. Likewise the effect of pollution is vast. The nature resource becomes less and less for people to use improperly. Not only is our health influenced by the pollution, but also we have to spend more cost protecting the environment. Now the most important thing is improve the pollution. What can we do? First, grow more trees because its helpful to clarify the air and store the water in ground. Second, make it a habit to recycle and reduce the trash. Third, to decrease the quantity of substance that ruins the environment. Everybody has a responsibility to safeguard the environment.
posted by Butterfly @ 3:35 PM
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not only but also ->不用加逗號
Now the most important thing is improve the pollution.->這句怪怪的!改一下唄!!
because its helpful to clarify the ->it's~
結論不錯!!但因有許多專有名詞..有些看不懂...但寫的不錯唷!!
寫的不錯喔,讀那麼多單字果然不ㄧ樣
讀那麼多單字果然有用呢!!
咳...後來發現我好像講錯了
你寫的很好嘎
你不要再做傷眼鏡的事...
不然也會變成pollution的~
(不要難怪啦^^)
1.cause 應該可數吧！(The cause of pollution is very much.)
寫得粉讚辣！！掌聲鼓勵鼓勵！
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