Tips for staying healthy-draft1
Staying healthy are many ways, here are four tips. First of all, leading a regularly life. Don’t stay up late and get enough sleep or you don’t have energy to do things well. Second, don’t eat junk food. That only increase burden to the body. Third, having exercise more is good for you. I think that is not only help you consume surplus heat but also make you in good shape. Finally, I think it’s also the most important one, keeping in good mood anytime. That will help you do things efficiently and happily. If you follow these tips the healthy body you’ll get soon.
posted by Butterfly @ 3:19 AM
7 Comments:
Staying healthy are many ways 這是蝦米啊?
Staying healthy are many ways->這句怪怪ㄉ不通順
having exercise->應該是taking吧!
If you follow these tips the
healthy body you’ll get soon.->If you follow these tips, you'll get a healthy body.
1.not only help you consume surplus heat but also make you in good shape.在but also前要加逗點
2.keeping in good mood anytime.應該是in a good mood
Staying healthy are many ways,
are可以改has巴..真的怪怪的
1..Staying healthy are many ways->是不是要加個have之類的..
2..having exercise ->taking
Staying healthy are many ways
我建議
There are many ways for staying healthy
having exercise more
我覺得taking 比較好
keeping in "a"good mood
If you follow these tips the healthy body you’ll get soon.怪怪的
Staying healthy "are" many ways用has會不會比較好阿?
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