Autobiography-1-draft1
At a windy and rainy night, a little girl was born, and that is me. My name is Pei-Ying Hsu. There are five people in my family. My father is a businessman, and my mom is a career woman. They are very democratic so I can do many things that I want, and I become independent and responsible. My older sister, a good example to me, is a college student now. My younger sister is 7 years younger than me, so I patiently look after her. I’m very glad she is a well-educated child. I’m very lucky to be brought up in such a healthy and harmonious environment; consequently, I have a positive perspective toward life.I study in Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School and major in English. Besides English, I’m interested in Japanese, too. In my opinion, learning more languages can help me communicate with more people in this global village. I’m outgoing and optimistic. I’m very glad to aid people whenever they need me. If I have trouble they are also willing to aid me. My hobby is to do some handicraft that can train me more patient and careful. I also like to read philosophic novels in my spare time that can help me build a positive attitude for encountering troubles. I like to play basketball and watch NBA and SBL in my leisure time. I think that more exercise can help me become healthier.
posted by Butterfly @ 6:30 PM
8 Comments:
1.and that "was" me
2.I study in "Nation" Tainan Commercial Vocational "Senior High" School
3.that can train me "become" more patient and careful
"If I have trouble they are also willing to aid me."用逗點隔開成 If I have trouble ,they are also willing to aid me.
(look after her????? 你不要欺負她就很好了XDDDDD)
I study in Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School>>Senior High
Besides English, I’m interested in Japanese, too.>>
I think that more exercise>>that doing more exercise
風吹雨打的夜晚阿,好險妳沒說一個beautiful girl誕生
1.that can train me more patient and careful.應該是train me to be more patient and careful
看來你並不熟悉我們學校唷!
Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School ->前面要加Nation..後面是Senior High School
I study in Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School
應該是I study in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School
要多National 後面是Senior High
前面是National不是Nation啦>__<
連學校名字都打錯這樣不行唷~~
你的開頭真ㄅ一ㄤˋ…
你確定你有在照顧你妹嗎…？
你是在玩她吧= =
High Senior School ->Senior High School
that "was" me
"Nation" Tainan Commercial Vocational "Senior High" School
If I have trouble"," they are..
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