The winners in international competition-draft1
Terry and Julia are fashion designers. Six months ago they designed one and only dress which is named forest together. From discussing to finish the dress that took them two months. They send the dress to Paris to compete with those designers who are all very well-known. The winner in this international competition will not only get a lot of money, but also become famous very soon. Because the association got the wrong address, they notified them late about three months. Terry and Julia thought their dress failed to be chosen, so when Julia got the mail to know that they were the winners in this competition , she called Terry immediately. They were too happy to cry , and couldn’t say anything at that moment. Account on they really did the work very seriously. Now they are preparing to go Paris to get their rewards. I think after a few years they will be excellent designers in the world.
posted by Butterfly @ 7:44 AM
8 Comments:
one and only dress
這是啥?
獨一無二嗎用
unique
but also 前不用逗號
to go Paris to get their
我覺得怪怪的耶
They send the dress to
改sent
你還真有想像力阿!!虧你想得到..寫的不錯唷!!要改的都被改了!
如靜香說的要改的都改了
寫的真的不錯!
想像力豐富!
1.From discussing to finish the dress that took them two months是taking吧
2.Account on好像沒這個
1.one and only dress
我覺得 "one of the kind"
2. but also become famous very soon
前不用遏逗點
one and only dress??
which "is" named forest together.->不用用was嗎？
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