Autobiography-2-draft1
When I was a junior high student, I was the leader of my class. This experience makes me become more responsible and own the ability to lead a group. As I was a freshman in senior high school, I took a Japanese course, and I was interested in Japanese, too. I passed Level Four of the Japanese Language Proficiency Test, after learning for one year. Besides, I’m expert at typing since, in my opinion, typing is the basic ability for this modern world. I got the professional-level certification of Chinese Data Input and advanced level of English Data Input. Moreover, our school held the competition of English drama in 2006. All my classmates and I were enthusiastic about this, and finally we won the championship to our continuous efforts. What’s more exciting, we represented our school and got national English drama competition. This competition means a lot to me. First, it let me know the importance of teamwork that everyone is essential in a team. Second, it was a national competition that I firstly participated in, and I widened my view by appreciating other schools performance. I learned a lot from all these, and I know how to handle interpersonal ship in a group, and enhance my knowledge very much.
In my future, I plan to get into a good college, and continuously major in English. Furthermore, in order to be an outstanding tour guide, I’ll take some tourism courses which help develop my profession. Also, I can realize foreign cultures more by traveling around the world. Consequently, I am determined to even harder to achieve my goal
posted by Butterfly @ 6:07 AM
8 Comments:
1. I passed Level Four of the Japanese Language Proficiency Test "," after learning for one year. 逗點可以去掉
2. I learned a lot from all these, and I "knew" how to handle interpersonal ship in a group
I passed Level Four of the Japanese Language Proficiency Test, after learning 應該不用逗點吧
This experience makes me become more responsible>>make要用現在式(?)
Besides, I’m expert at typing since>>為什麼要用since
1..I passed Level Four of the Japanese Language Proficiency Test, after learning for one year.->after 前面不用加逗號
2..Besides, I’m expert at typing since, in my opinion, typing is the basic ability for this modern world. ->since是不是放錯位置呢?
This experience "makes"->made吧??
"I learned a lot from all these, and I know how to handle interpersonal ship in a group, and enhance my knowledge very much."
是 I knew 吧？
Besides, I’m expert at typing since, in my opinion, typing is the basic ability for this modern world.
那個since怪怪的
I learned a lot from all these, and I "know" how...->knew
good!…不想改了= =""
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