I don't like rainy day
I don’t like rainy day for several reasons. Firstly, I may get wet in rainy day. I feel uncomfortable if my clothes are most. Moreover, I may be sick. Secondly, the traffic condition is absolutely bad. Since there is much traffic congestion, it really wastes time and I don’t like this feeling if I just wait and have nothing to do. It’s also dangerous to drive on the slippery road, because it may cause some accidents. Thirdly, I’m always down on rainy day. For instances, it’s inconvenient to go shopping or do some outdoor activities. Furthermore, they sky is so dark that I’m always in a bad mood. In short, I don’t like the weather of the rainy day.
posted by Butterfly @ 6:16 AM
6 Comments:
寫得太短了吧|||||
I feel uncomfortable if my clothes are "most".
打錯字了吧??
1.I don’t like rainy "days" 我覺得加s比較好，後面的也是
2.if my clothes "is" "wet"
clothes 不可數吧？
3. For "instance"
I’m always down on >>用feel 比較好吧?
好像可以再寫多一點
I feel uncomfortable if my clothes are "most". 妳想說的是"wet"吧？
句子感覺有點短，應該還可以加長，讓人感覺理由較充分有理。
they sky is so dark應該是the sky
你第一次寫這麼少呢!!不像妳唷..
I feel uncomfortable if my clothes are "most" 妳打錯了吧!!!
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