Making decision-draft1
Growing up means making my own decision. When I’m 18 years old, under law, I am regarded as an adult. At the meantime, I have to take responsibility for my behavior. As I grow up little by little, I shouldn’t depend on my parents all the time. After all, they can’t stay at my side forever. I think the most important one is, no one can decide my life. Only by myself do I know what I want. In brief, I must be independent and responsible for myself.The hardest decision that I ever made was in my second grade of senior high, I have the Economic course and Accounting course. I wondered whether to take commercial courses to pass entrance examination or not. In the beginning, I hoped to give me more choices. After thinking over, I prefer English to commercial courses and I was afraid that I will take one thing into consideration to the neglect of the other. In short, I can't regret for my decision, and be confident for my self.
posted by Butterfly @ 5:06 AM
9 Comments:
I "prefer" English to commercial....
應該是用過去是preferred。
1.As soon as I reach the legal age-18, I will be regarded as an adult. 我覺得啦…
2.Only by myself do I know what I want. by後應該要加動詞比較好，我覺得
"only I myself know what I want"
I hoped to give me more choices>>我覺得me要改myself
and be confident for my self
myself不用分開
Only by myself do I know what I want.我一直覺得do I know加在這好怪
Only by myself do I know what I want.這句怪怪的…
prefer要過去式
Only by myself do I know what I want. ->這句怪怪的..
prefer->perferred
"Only by myself do I know what I want." 我覺得這句可以用加強句
→"It is only I know what I want."
I "prefered" English to
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